Monday, 9 September 2019

How I Write a Review


Reviews. They can be a slightly sticky topic. Many people have many different ways of writing them, and different opinions on how they should be done. Personally, I found my happy spot after I began writing lots of reviews and read many posts/watching many videos on writing reviews. I will post those links next week for you guys to check out for yourself (I highly recommend them!). And I just thought I'd share how I, personally, write reviews. :) 

So say I just read a book and finished it. We’ll take “The Tiger of Mysore,” by G.A. Henty, as an example. (I have actually just finished this but haven’t written a review yet so this will get that off my To-Do List :P). 


So, I just finished “Tiger” and now I’m going to review it. First off, I’ll rate it. I personally used to rate everything 5 stars unless I had a problem with it, but I changed my mind when I began bookstagramming. Now, I do it on the principal of Goodreads’ and Amazon's rating.


5 stars—I loved it! 
4 stars—I really liked it. :D 
3 stars—I liked it. 
2 stars—Meh... it was OK. 
1 star—I did not like it.
Personally, I also added a 5+ star which means I 100% totally loved it (we can cite “Jonas & Olivia” by Victoria Minks for an example). I also added .5 stars to add extra distinctions. So, for example: 4.5 means I really liked it but there was probably some content that lowered my rating from 5 or 5+. 3.5 means I enjoyed it, but didn’t “really, really like it.” 1.5 would be I didn’t like it overall, but there were a few parts I did like. And so forth.

This year I've also started doing hearts. (You will notice that my older reviews don't have hearts; that's why). I borrowed this idea from my friend Abi. She started rating books on a scale of 1 to 10 mushrooms (or shrooms) because it gave her more freedom. I decided to adapt that to my reviewing style so people could tell how much I loved a book. There's 5+-star books, and 5+-stars books. So I took 10 hearts and gave each one a meaning. 




So, back to “Tiger.” I really very much enjoyed this book and I think I will give it 4.5 stars. (As I said, .5 is as much as saying there’s content I didn’t like, so keep your eyes open when you see that in my reviews). I can't give 4.5/10 hearts, so I'll round up to 5/10 hearts.


Now I will write the actual review. First I’ll start with the rating, so that it’s right there in the review and not just on the Amazon or Goodreads rating thingamajig. Next, I will say things I liked about this book.

4.5 stars & 5/10 hearts. I’ve read this book several times, and is still highly excited by it. There is a lot of scope for imagination in it, and from beginning to end there are few parts where the focus is not on the hero and his exciting adventures.
Personally, given the number of reviews I write and my personal likings, I don't talk at length about the characters I loved or how amazing the scenes were. There are reviewers who do so and it is totally fine; I, personally, prefer to write and read shorter reviews. But if I did rave over the characters, I would divide it between here and the closing phrases. 

Next comes what I didn’t like--stuff that personally didn’t appeal to me. I.e, a poor writing style, or a political perspective, or a character that drive me crazy, etc. 
“Because of the highly exciting nature of the hero’s adventures, I found the historical parts unusually boring, but there were very few of those.
Then comes the content. Content is the sexual, religious, and moralistic stuff such as drinking, kissing, language, and things that I think do not line up with the Bible. So, for “Tiger”... 
“There was some mentions of smoking; very little drinking, and all for medicinal purposes if I remember correctly; two kisses mentioned between a young man and the girl he later marries; some lying; & discussions on second sight which I don’t totally agree with.”
So, I list the negative content but I don’t go on and on about it unless it really bothered me, in which case I’ll make a separate statement about it. If there's a lot of content, then I state here that there is content and add, "Look below for a list of the content" and after the quotes I put a list. See an example here.

After listing the content and/or negative stuff, I close with more positivity. In the case of “Tiger,” I have:
“This is actually one of Henty’s cleanest books, and one of my personal favourites. Dick is humorous, gallant, and always involved in interesting--often thrilling--adventures. And the whole kept-prisoner-by-Tippoo part, in both Mr. Holland’s and Annie’s cases, personally fascinate me.”
By starting with positivity, the reader of my review starts off with positive feelings about this book. He then reads what I’ve listed as negative, and then finished with some more positivity to leave with a pleasant impression towards the book. 

All this is, of course, if I liked the book. In that case, I of course want to spread it around. If on the contrary I did not like this book, I will probably start negative, add the positive I can, and then end as nutrally as I can. If I have nothing positive to say, I always make it a short review basically listing my objections. 


(By the way, a little note about typos: instead of writing in my review that there were typos, I approach the author (if they are Independent Published) and let her know that I found some, so that she can change them. Indies can republish books and remove typos, so a review stating there are many typos might be incorrect in a few months. However, if it’s a traditionally published book and the quality is poor, I might note that in my review.)


After writing my thoughts, I then pick out one of my favourite quotes. I have three categories, and I pick one quotes for each category.


Category #1 is A Favourite Quote [note the ‘a’. This isn’t THE favourite quote, it’s a favourite quote. ;)]. This is basically a quotable quote. xP By which I mean, something you would quote or write down. So for example, suppose that while reading Louisa May Alcott’s “Little Women,” this phrase really stuck out to you: “... go to God with all your little cares, and hopes, and sins, and sorrows, as freely and confiding you as you come to your mother.” This is where you would write it down.


The next category is “A Favourite Beautiful Quote,” either in creating a beautiful image or having a beautiful sound to it. Such as this quote from 
Beautiful Blue World by Suzanne LaFleur:
The glowing candlelight … seemed to flicker inside me as well, warm and soothing.“A shred of darkness remained, like that creeping through the windows between the curtains.”
And my last category is “A Favourite Humorous Quote.” Pretty self-explanatory. xD

So, here’s “Tiger” as your model again:

“A Favourite Quote: “‘I do not want you to be quarrelsome, ... but I have heard your father say that a man who can use his fists well is sure to be cool and quick, in any emergency. ... Therefore, Dick, I say, never quarrel on your own account, but whenever you see a boy bullying a smaller one, take the opportunity of giving him a lesson while learning one yourself. In the days of old, you know, the first duty of a true knight was to succour the oppressed, and I want you to be a true knight.”  
“A Favourite Humorous Quote: “‘I will tell you about it, as we ride.’ 
“‘You had better tell me afterwards, Dick. I have not ridden a horse in my life, except when they were taking me from the coast to Mysore, and I shall have enough to do to keep my seat and attend to my steering, without trying to listen to you.’”
As you see, there’s no Favourite Beautiful Quote in this book. Henty doesn't often have beautiful quotes. ;P 

As for the length, I try to keep my reviews short, as I said earlier. The quotes make them longer, and I’d personally rather read a concise review than a long, fangirly one about all the characters (who I don’t know anyways, if I’m just checking out this book). So I keep that kind of long, gushing writing for a blog post, although some of my reviews are longer than other when I really deeply love the book. (See an example here). ;) Feel free to check out my Amazon profile to see other examples of how I write reviews. :)



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Let me know your tips & tricks for reviewing!

Saturday, 7 September 2019

Book Review 14: Our Heritage to Save by Ryana Lynn Miller

Happy Thursday, friends! Today's review is book two of the Battle for Heritage Series... a book that touched me in an unprecedented way...




Our Heritage to Save 


Synopsis: 
1862
Our Fight For Freedom 
Heritage. Family. Freedom. What would you be willing to do to protect them? This is the question that the soldiers of the Blue and the Gray asked themselves multiple times no doubt during the War Between the States. And the Mason family is not exempt from answering it. 
“I have sons fighting in both armies, and that is not acceptable to me. My younger son chose his…his ‘country’ over his family.” 
Seth’s eyes were sincere as he slowly said, “Hard decisions have to be made in time of war, sir. I have cousins in the Union army as well. You’re right, it hurts. It hurts my mama a lot, because she’s from up north. But the rights of life, liberty and property must be defended.” 
Join the Masons as they enter the second year of conflict between the Confederacy and the Union. As loyalties are tested, some soldiers must choose between their beliefs and their families. Be reminded that war is not all glory, but also a good deal of anxiety, sorrow and broken dreams.
May the whole family enjoy this story as they seek a closer relationship with the Lord and learn more about our Nation’s history. You'll Learn About:
Civil War Photography
Kernstown
Shiloh
The Battle of Seven Days
Antietam
Fredericksburg
Divided Family
The Emancipation Proclamation
And Much, Much More!
Then Here's to Our Confederacy, Strong we Are and Brave. Like Patriots of Old, We'll Fight Our Heritage to Save!


My Review:
⭐⭐ ❤︎❤︎❤︎❤︎❤︎
4.5 stars & 5/10 hearts. I enjoyed this book much more than the first. The writing style is still a little weak, but the atmosphere of the book is amazing. War pervades everything and there is no relief. I am distressed to think that this heartbreak will continue for three more years. There is no glory of war in this book, only the dreary, heartbreaking reality. It’s not gory—in fact, it’s still written in a juvenile style—but it’s very striking. I have never been marked by a war book like this before. My heart is wrenched by all the broken children. I love Burdy and Richard... and Drew, and Alvin. And several other characters ;) I really, really look forward to the next book!!

Unfortunately, my quotes from this book were all wiped off by my Kindle crash. I will update this review when I reread this book. 



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Have you read any of this author' books?? 

 

Thursday, 5 September 2019

Book Review 13: The Land of Cotton by Ryana Lynn Miller

Happy Thursday, friends!!! This is the first in a series on the Civil War/War Between the States which I enjoyed ;) 



The Land of Cotton 

Synopsis: 
1861
Our Home in Dixieland
The Land of Cotton is a story of two strong wills: the will of man and the will of God. Watch how each is played out in hearts and lives both on and off the battlefield.
“You mean to tell me that you plan to lead part of this family into this rebellion? Don’t think that this only affects you, Silas. You married my daughter and this affects all of us!”
Join the Masons, an ordinary family living during an extraordinary time in our nation’s history, the Civil War. See them challenged to do some extraordinary things while seeking the will of God. Read History on almost every page as the Masons realize God has a time for everything… even war! (Ecclesiastes 3:8)
This book that the whole family will enjoy has a two-fold challenge in it: meet the Savior and know Him well, and study your history and know it well. You'll Learn About:
Ft. Sumter
Secession
First Manassas
Home Front
Camp Life
Divided Family
Oh, I wish I was in the land of cotton. Old times there are not forgotten. Look away! Look away! Look away, Dixieland!


My Review:
 ❤︎❤︎❤︎
3 stars & 3/10 hearts. I was very eager to read this series, as it is set in the Civil War, and although a Canadian, I have always been interested in reading every Civil War/War Between the States book I can get upon—because I can never make up my mind completely which side I am for. I found this story interesting. The reasons for fighting were not very convincing, in my mind—I still am not convinced that the South was right in rebelling and that God was with them. But I was pleased to see Richard’s and Seth’s reasons, which were noble, even if I didn’t see eye-to-eye with them. I found it a little annoying that almost every Confederate was saved or religious, or became so, while the Northerners were almost all—if not all—unsaved. And the saved characters really got off so easily—none of them struggled really. But that might change as the War gets worse. ;) The historical part was well done, except the language was very modern. On the other hand, the author made the southerners live for me with their “y’all,” “them things,” and “ain’t”! ;) I liked the characters and I really want to read the rest of these books. (And see more of Richard, David, Jeremy, Alvin, Drew, & Philip!).  I’m eager to read this author's other books.

Unfortunately, my quotes from this book were all wiped off by my Kindle crash. I will update this review when I reread this book. 



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Have you read any Civil War/War Between the States books? What's your favourite time period to read about?

Monday, 2 September 2019

August 2019 in Review

Hello, friends! Happy September (a week late but anyways). August wasn’t quite the month I was expecting, but it was good :)


FYI... this post is picture-heavy. You are warned ;)  

~Happenings~
// Celebrated my bookstagram birthday! My little book nook Old-Fashioned Book Love is now over a year old. Technically, its birthday was July 31st but I forgot lol. I learned quite a bit from that little bookstagam... and oddly, the biggest lesson was to swallow my pride. This is something I’ve struggled with all my life... and I’m trying to defeat. 🙏🏼
// Speaking of birthdays, we celebrated my little sister’s 11th birthday! She’s my special buddy. 💕She’s growing up so fast! <3 Lissa made her a beautiful cake...
Isn’t it lovely?! And it was super good. I love Yellow Cake!! 
// WE WENT TO THE LAKE!!! I love playing in the water but we haven’t a pool so we only get to do that when we go to a lake or a hotel. We weren’t able to go all July because we were sick all the time, so I was so excited to go to Lac Taureau early in August!! We had a blast. It’s gorgeous there...









And I believe I taught myself how to swim! I can float and I was always trying to swim... my parents tried to teach me but I’m absolutely panic-stricken when I’m out of my depth. This time though, I’m pretty sure I was swimming! I’m eager to go back next year and try again :D 
// I blogged a lot. Well, I didn’t post more posts than usual but I got almost every post for September and August written. 🙌🏼
// I started school. Not college, yet, but I’m preparing for college by doing grammar. It’s a lot of fun!
// We got a nest of wasps under our front porch and had to make a sign...
// I wrote a short story sequel for Chords and started a short story prequel too. And another random bit of flash fiction which I’m completely loving. So, besides editing, where I don’t count my words for some reason, I wrote over 5,000 words this month. Not bad ;) I've been sprinting a lot with Kassie & Ryana Lynn which is amazing! And those two, with Hannah, helped me brainstorm and turn this story into a short story a little longer than I expected ;) 
// We took a walk in the woods to take school pictures. It’s so beautiful there!! There were wayyyyy too many mosquitoes though... so the picture plan kind of failed. xD 


// We also went to the Zoo with my uncle and cousin. It was so much fun! I’m not an animal person generally but I loved seeing the exotic animals. Elephants, lions, jaguars (the tiger was sleeping! 😢), the colourful birds, the cute meerkats and red panda, the beautiful fish... 💚 Touching the sting rays was so much fun too! And the jellyfish were so cool!! They have a small amusement park in the zoo and Lissa & I rode the Ferris Wheel. I used to love it. This time I almost panicked and vowed I’d never do it again. But I think that if I do it several times in a row I’ll enjoy, just like before. ;) 














// I read a lot of good posts on Instagram. If you’re on there, you should definitely follow Quintessentially Living. Her posts are A M A Z I N G. And if you aren’t, I still suggest hopping over sometimes and reading her posts because they are really SO good and helpful! 
// Just hung out and played with my littlest brother. 💙 He is growing up so fast!! 
// I forgot a book outside one evening so I ran out to get it and ran back up the porch steps... you know what came next. It hurt. I skinned AND bruised both shins, bruised my left knee, and scratched my right foot twice. It hurt, but mostly it looked so bad it totally grossed me out. I can handle blood, but I cannot handle bruises. My sister had to put the bandaids on for me because I was almost crying with disgust. I must have bruised my bones because they still hurt! 
// I did a lot of driving practice. I also flunked my driving test.
// I took a lot of sky pictures... 💙💙💙





// I fell really behind on the August Scripture Writing Challenge but caught up in the end and finsihed a little before August ended! :) 

~Bookish Stuff~
// I got to reread my second favourite book AND my favourite one. (Well, actually, I never did read my favourite one cover-to-cover... 🙈 I mean I didn’t read all the exercises and I skipped some parts... I basically just read my favourite parts lol. But it is PHENOMENAL and I’m so eager to actually read the whole thing and learn more! I haven't finished it yet... its 590 pages long, peeps! 
As for the second favourite, it is also amazing. Daniel Boone is definitely a hero of mine... I’ve always loved this era and this book is full of amazing anecdotes. And it’s so well-written!  
// I read several ARCs. It’s officially fun. 😁 I’m so eager for them to come out/glad they are out!! 
// I buddy-read again...  twice! I read my first John Buchan book with this amazing girl (it was really good!!). And I think Hannah & Ryana Lynn & I are going to start a perpetual buddy-reading, lol! We picked a new book even before we finished Kidnapped... xD 
This poem came to mind when we read Kidnapped... <3 I love it so much!!! 
Random chatting about Kidnapped.... xD
And about The Thirty-Nine Steps ;) ;) .
// I caught up on my reviews, finally! I posted a whole bunch, wrote a lot, and got the quotes for almost every one. Reviews are like laundry... there’s always a new one appearing just when you’ve clean your list out! 😆

// I *coughs* downloaded a lot of books. But I only bought one (and it was $1.14. Well, I did buy another but it was a birthday gift). The rest were all free! 😄 I named my Unread Books collection and my sister found it hilarious.... xD
// I finally reached 300 books read!! I’m hoping to reach 400 this year now. 😁😁😁 That would be SO cool!!

That feeling was so crazy!! // I went to the park with my family and took so many beautiful bookstagram pictures! 



// And I participated in my first book tour which was so cool!!

Books finished in August: 53. 
Books reviewed in August: 55. 
Reviews published in August: I'm not 100% sure, but it's over 50. 


~Instagram Posts I Loved~ 
"I find it very hard to be still...." by @thereforeihavehope.
"Take heart in this..." by @quintessentiallyliving. 
"What counsel are we listening to?" by @amandateroauthor.
"Change is hard..." by @abiandtheroots.
"Who are we exalting?" by @amandateroauthor. 
"A stone lay in the hollow..." by @thereforeihavehope.
"You ever have those lessons..." by @amandateroauthor. 
~Blog Posts I Loved ~
The 10 Book Questions Tag | Soldier Girl Stories
Bridgers, Because Luke 10 | Soldier Girl Stories
Epic Tattered Wings Post | Soldier Girl Stories
I Drive Your Truck | Soldier Girl Stories
The Music Tag | Soldier Girl Stories

How did your August go, friends?? :)